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first we should know that both  of these poet's had a bad experience in their lives, suffering similarly under tyranny and oppression during world war ii, which shaped their perspective in very different ways. milosz is the one that took it very personally and considered his life as emotionally destroyed while szymborska looked at it as another chance at life that might never be given again. it is clear that the poet that addresses death in terms of the times they live in and as a threat of fascism is milosz. this is apparent in the poem “city without a name”.
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The most important point to highlight is the fact that both poets endured lives of suffering, tyranny, and oppression during World War II. These experiences shaped their perspective in very different ways.

Milosz took the affronts and misfortunes very personally and considered them to have emotionally destroyed his life. Szymborska, on the other hand, saw in his survival and endurance another chance at life which might never again be given to him.

It is Milosz who addresses death in terms of the time in which he lived and and in an analogous manner to the threat of fascism. The nature of this influence is apparent in the poem ''City Without A Name''.

gay mainly is used with men and homosexual can be used with men and women

"facing the rising sun of our new day begun

let us march on till victory is won.",

because the rising sun is a symbol of hope.