53. in the preceding sentence, the writer is considering
revising the phrase "choked out to the word “harmed”
and the word "overrun" to the word "affected.” should
the writer make these revisions?
a. yes, because the revisions provide clearer reasons
for the initiatives to remove dyer's woad from
montana.
b. yes, because the revisions add a level of technical
detail to an otherwise casual essay.
c. no, because the revisions suggest that the work of
the group lily belongs to has been largely
ineffective.
d. no, because the revisions downplay how destruc-
tive dyer's woad has been in montana.

Mr. culpepper has disdain for his students and does not respect them. mr. culpepper is trying to create a supportive environment for his students. mr. culpepper does not know his students and does not try to know them. mr. culpepper wants to his students but does not know how to do it.

Which line in this excerpt from the great gatsby by f. scott fitzgerald contains a simile? about half way between west egg and new york the motor-road hastily joins the railroad and runs beside it for a quarter of a mile, so as to shrink away from a certain desolate area of land. this is a valley of ashes—a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens where ashes take the forms of houses and chimneys and rising smoke and finally, with a transcendent effort, of men who move dimly and already crumbling through the powdery air. occasionally a line of grey cars crawls along an invisible track, gives out a ghastly creak and comes to rest, and immediately the ash-grey men swarm up with leaden spades and stir up an impenetrable cloud which screens their obscure operations from your sight.

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