Read this sentence from chang's story:
the traffic was so loud he couldn't hear what the two men
were saying. if the listener had heard the old man's
instructions accurately, the tragedy might have been
prevented.
how could chang best rewrite the first sentence to include
descriptive details and sensory language?
o a) the listener was deafened by the sound of the traffic.
ob)
none of them could make out a sound over the
rumble of the traffic.