*read this summary of the section “birth of an idea."
what is the best way to co and shorten the
sentences in this summar
senator nelson worked on environmental causes
with little progress until 1969 when, inspired by
vietnam war protestors, he called for earth
day-a national day of teach-ins about the
environment
as a senator in washington,
nelson began working to
the environment.
however, he made little
progress until 1969, when he
got an idea from vietnam
war protestors. he would
call for a national day of
teach-ins about the
environment, called earth
nelson worked for the environment and made
little progress until he got an idea from vietnam
war protestors for a national day called earth
day.
day.
in washington, nelson followed the model of
americans protesting the vietnam war and
started a national day of teach-ins about the
environment.
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Crusoes inner struggle with the consequences

Read the excerpt from queen elizabeth's response to parliament's request that she marry. for i assure you (what credit my assurance may have with you, i cannot tell, but what credit it shall deserve to have, the sequel shall declare) i will never in that matter conclude any thing that shall be prejudicial to the realm. for the weal, good and safety whereof, i will never shun to spend my life; and whomsoever it shall be my chance to light upon, i trust he shall be such, as shall be as careful for the realm as you; i will not say as myself, because i cannot so certainly determine of any other, but by my desire he shall be such as shall be as careful for the preservation of the realm and you, as myself. in this excerpt, queen elizabeth says "for the weal, good and safety whereof, i will never shun to spend my life" in order to convince her audience that she is unbiased, intelligent, and rarely makes mistakes. inform her audience that she will work hard to win back the broken trust of her followers. persuade her audience that she will never make personal decisions that will harm england. remind her audience that she is the ruler and in charge of enacting laws that protect england.

Me read the letter. dear aunt mary, you for the wonderful painting. you are so talented! i was thrilled that you chose to paint horses. you must have remembered that i was crazy about horses when i was a little kid—and i still love them. i have hung the painting in my room so that i can see it every morning when i wake up. your loving niece, celia what makes this letter appropriate for its intended audience? it is written from the third-person point of view. it is concise and impersonal. its sentence structure is varied. its language is informal.