50.19
read the excerpt from labal
iqbal is best characterized in this excerpt when the author
uses the
we took turns watching over him and soothing his pain by
sponging him with cool water. we could see that iqbal
would recover quickly, to our nightly visits, the
food, the water, and those oranges that all had stolen from
the garden for him.
"brother," said salman one morning when iqbal finally
returned to work, "you were really strong, nobody has over
had the courage to do something like that to hussain
khan. do you realize how angry he still is about the
carpet?
actions of igbal to show that he is injured by the other
boys
thoughts of iqbal to show that he is angry with the other
boys
words of others to show that iqbal is foolish,
actions of others to show that iqbal is respected

they fear for their lives

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.

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