Read the following thesis statement and pay attention to the controlling idea. is the controlling idea specific enough to make an effective thesis statement, or is it too general and unclear?

my vacation to paris was very nice.
a. specific; effective
b. too general; unclear

read the following thesis statement and pay attention to the controlling idea. is the controlling idea specific enough to make an effective thesis statement, or is it too general and unclear?

fishing is an inexpensive, relaxing, and rewarding hobby.
a. specific; effective
b. too general; unclear

which of the following two thesis statements is stronger?
a. going bungee jumping in new zealand was a real rush.
b. bungee jumping off the kawarau bridge was the highlight of my trip to queenstown, new zealand because it enabled me to live in the moment and conquer my fear of heights.

which of the following two thesis statements is stronger?
a. using renewable energy resources such as solar or wind power can businesses reduce their consumption of expendable fossil fuels.
b. using renewable energy resources are a good way for businesses to save the environment.

in which paragraph does the thesis statement typically appear?
a. the first body paragraph
b. the second body paragraph
c. the introduction

an outline for an essay should not include the following?
a. two to four main supporting ideas
b. two to four topic sentences
c. all supporting points and examples