Which is the best thesis statement for an essay on school uniforms?
mandatory school uniforms have many positives and negatives that should be considered.
requiring school uniforms has many advantages because students focus on their studies rather than their clothing.
students may find school uniforms dull and characterless.
required school uniforms will be welcomed by some students and rejected by others.

(B).  Mandatory school uniforms have many advantages because students focus on their studies rather than on their clothing,but even more important is the fact that uniforms avoid discrimination and highlights the pride of belonging to a specific institution.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

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