Fix the grammar issues and make the sentences formal, make the entire paper formal.

use it to buy the fattest block of cheese

i think the literacy device is "it's frozen head"

jenkins wanted the narrator to write a ghost story for his magazine. he wanted the narrator to give the readers a story based on the supernatural. he wanted him to give the readers real 'horror' stories and not the type of live ghosts which he had presented in his earlier stories.