(romeo and juliet- letter invite) any recommendations to make this better?
the masquerade ball
from the capulet residence of verona
wear your masks
this night i hold a feast
7 pm will be
beware, no montagues
grab a glass
dance the night away

No, I love it! I think it is perfect!

either a donut or a sphere or a pancake or a flat sphere. it depends on where the vertical line is.

if the line goes through the center of the circle and is perpendicular to a diameter containing the center, then you get a flat circle.

if the line and the diameter of a the circle meet in the center of the diameter and at an angle, you get a pancake.

if the line is on the circumference of the circle and is at right angles   to the circle you get a ring.

if the line contains the diameter, you get a sphere.

the the line is parallel to the diameter and touches the circumference, you get a donut.

i'd say the answer is nuisance. i hope i .