Read the conclusion to a personal statement.
(1) i’ve had some growth experiences. (2) they’ve me to improve my math skills. (3) moreover, i have learned to apply these skills to designing and constructing movie sets. (4) i’m looking forward to honing my skills by working as a production assistant on a film this summer.
the best way to improve the conclusion is to
a)revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic.
b)add details about a future goal to sentence 2.
c)delete sentence 3 because it is repetitive.
d)specify the name of the film in sentence 4.

Read the excerpt from suffragists' "great demand" banner. in 1917, more than one thousand women stood before the white house in a cold, pouring rain, holding silent vigil to demand a constitutional amendment to extend the vote to them. their quest to be enfranchised by law was known at the time as the great demand. the smithsonian's great demand banner, as it came to be called, declares in bold words and style the determination of the women who made and carried it. their campaign on behalf of women sought to move america one step closer to fulfilling the nation's long-deferred promise of equality under the law. which statements about this excerpt are correct? check all that apply.