Read the paragraph from a research-based essay on the
benefits of a classroom with a learning center-based layout
for preschoolers.
what is the best way to revise the paragraph to connect
ideas?
(1) a classroom should be set up as a series of learning
centers, which are designated stations that encourage
exploration. (2) this layout allows children to move freely
throughout the room, delving into activities that interest
them and possibly discovering new materials and games
(3) self-directed play and learning promotes confidence
and independence in kids. (4) students are focused on a
task of their choosing, enjoying themselves, and interacting
in smaller groups. (5) discipline problems are often
reduced
o by splitting sentence 1 into two sentences to separate
the ideas
o by splitting sentence 2 into two sentences to separate
the ideas
o by combining sentences 2 and 3 with the transition word
therefore
o by combining sentences 4 and 5 with the transition word
so