What two things is ponyboy thinking about when he leaves the movie house?

Which revision of the sentence most effectively incorporates the literary term characterized?

Make sure the topic of your persuasive essay is not a. something someone else is writing about b. a fact c. something you have written about before

Aman lives on the twelfth floor of an apartment building. every morning he takes the elevator down to the lobby and leaves the building. in the evening, he gets into the elevator, and, if there is someone else in the elevator -- or if it was raining that day -- he goes back to his floor directly. otherwise, he goes to the tenth floor and walks up two flights of stairs to his apartment.