Which revision effectively incorporates transitions to improve the flow of ideas?
  technology and support were important, changing his perspective. he uses a simile “like a bird soaring through the sky” despite how he feels today.  technology and support were important in changing his perspective. to show the contrast of how the speaker feels, he uses a simile “like a bird soaring through the sky” to show how he feels today.  technology and support were very important. however, they changed his perspective. he uses a simile “like a bird soaring through the sky” because of how he feels today.  technology and support were important because they changed his perspective and because he uses a simile “like a bird soaring through the sky” to show how he feels today.