Read the beginning of denise’s personal narrative. 1. mr. thompson loves teaching science. 2. every single day, he becomes very excited about what he is talking about. 3. he waves his hands around, and asks, “isn’t this amazing? ” 4. all of his students love his enthusiasm.
what problem needs to be fixed in denise’s narrative?
1) denise needs to add a strong example of mr thompson’s enthusiasm.
2)denise needs to include herself as a character in the narrative.
3)denise needs to add a time relationship between sentences 3 and 4.
4)denise needs to change the pronoun “he” to the pronoun “we.”

B (2)

Explanation:

A personal narrative must include your self

The correct answer is 2. Denise needs to include herself as a character in the narrative.

Explanation:

A personal narrative is a type of text written to tell a personal experience using narrative elements, because of this, personal narratives are usually written in the first person, which means the author of this text becomes a character in the narrative. In the case of the narrative presented, it seems Denise wants to emphasize on a positive experience related to Mr. Thompson science class; however, this excerpt is not told from the first person and therefore, this excerpt needs to be fixed as Denise must include herself as a character.

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