Read the body paragraph from an analysis of "two kinds.”

amy tan uses imagery to give readers a mental picture of how a child feels after disappointing a parent. "the lid to the piano was closed, shutting out the dust, my misery, and her dreams." this memory reveals how final and frightening it was for jing-mei to have her mother give up on her.

what would make the evidence in this paragraph stronger? select two options.

another quotation from amy tan in the paragraph
commentary on the quotation in the paragraph
proper citation of the quotation in the paragraph
smooth integration of the evidence into the paragraph
a summary of the main points in the paragraph

Explanation:

To strengthen the present evidence, it is crucial to add the proper citations to the paragraph, so that readers can be more convinced over the validity of the evidence.

A smoother integration of the evidence to the claim would create a better way of presenting the evidence. Perhaps, by adding a transition sentence before the quotation such as, "This was described in the book when Jing-mei "

The other options are incorrect because it either adds a new evidence (A), already exists (B), or is irrelevant (E).

Basically options C. & D.

Explanation:

Correct on Edge.

for this, you need to remember something significant in your own life, for example, if you were bullied when you were younger, you can mention your memories on this and touch on how such treatment can harm other kids your age either physically or mentally. (racism, car crashes, a parent in the hospital are all very good subjects, think hard on it! )

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