Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

"oh, wow! " ashley cried. "i love these shoes." "they would look good on you," said her friend.

The consequence of jim smiley’s human foible adds to the story’s humor. what foible does smiley demonstrate?

What is the first step in summarizing a plot? restating central ideas and key details eliminating minor or unimportant details connecting ideas with logical transitions identifying important words and phrase

Explain the effect of the rhetorical questins for the below paragraph."i pinched myself: was i still alive? was i awake? how was it possible that men, women, and children were beiing burned and that the world kept silent? no. all this could not be real. a nightmare soon i would wake up with a start, my heart pounding, and find that i waas back in the room of my childhood, with my "