Write a hook relating to authority.

When starting an essay, a proper hook to engage your audience can be the use of yes/no questions related to the topic you want to introduce. In this case, one of the ways to start writing about authority could be the following:

Have you ever been subordinated to another person? Do you have exclusive power or control over a particular matter or group of people? If so, you can be under authority, or represent such authority yourself. These are differents points of view over such subject, which is known as the privilege of primacy that is recognized by influence. Such privilege is conceived on its own motion, and can be assigned or designated.

the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.