Question literary analysis: to kill a mockingbird

things to do:
choose a prompt
draft your claim sentences
choose your quotations (evidence)
create an outline
write one body paragraph
draft body paragraphs
write introduction and conclusion (yes, last! )
rough draft (4-5 paragraphs)

actually, as a writer myself, the rough draft is the second step for writing a story. the first step is an outline of what to include in the story. then its your rough draft after the outline. the rough draft is like the paper but you are aware that you will have to go back and change some stuff. the rough rough drafts do include and introduction paragraph a body, and a conclusion paragraph. writing the rough draft before your actual story the better it will be. all writers do that. a rough draft include everything that your original story will have but the draft will be needing some work. so your rough draft is sort of like a few paragraphs having the main points and ideas. you also wrote description, be careful although details are very important you have to keep in mind too much details in one paragraph is going to be too much. for example, i suffer though this as well, imagine you introduced other characters other than the main character, if you describe what they look like in one paragraph, its not going to be interesting for the reader

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.