Is this sentence grammatically correct?

lgbt people have experienced many problems that jeopardize their short-term and long-term health, whether it be by social, economic, or medical standards.

LGBT people have experienced many problems that jeopardize their short-term and long-term health, be it by social, economic, or medical standards.

LGBT people have experienced many problems that jeopardize their short-term and long-term health, whether it be by social, economic, or medical standards.

The comma after economic isn't needed since you have said "or" and you wrote jeopardize it's actually jeopardise ( If your in the uk it applies to you) . Apart from that it's brilliant :)

should you be the one doing this journal entry? it says "your special talent or skill". are you gonna lie 'bout your talent and make us fake a talent for you?

also this is a really easy journal entry, you can just think of a skill your good at and write did you work hard to become good at this skill (ex: drawing, writing, math, playing music, etc.) or does it come naturally (like a cool trick that you can do with your body). you can do all of that in 150 words. just try and think of a talent and even if your bad at this talent just say your working hard to become good at it.