Iknow its kind of tedious but would someone be willing to read over my essay and give me any feedback on things i could add or change?

Hi gamergirl. I edited your essay and left some pointers for you in the attachment. Everything in bold you can delete and anything in parenthesis is what you should add in. I hope this helps let me know.

the correct answer is d. in john paston's letter written friday, 14, 1476, he expresses his fear that he may have to go to war.

indeed, although the black death was ravaging europe, the pastons were relatively safe from it due to their social status as they were part of the landed gentry. it is clear that the vast majority of the victims of the pandemic were the poor. the reason why he is weary of having to go to war is because at the particular time england was also devastated by the war of the roses and paston, being a courtesan was inevitably involved.