coming around the turn too quickly, the race was lost when jill was thrown from her motorbike.

which rewrite of the sentence corrects the dangling modifier?

a. the race was lost coming around the turn too quickly when jill was thrown from her motorbike.

b. when jill was thrown from her motorbike, coming around the bend too quickly the race was lost.

c. from her motorbike, jill was coming around the bend too quickly and was thrown when the race was lost.

d. coming around the turn too quickly, jill was thrown from her motorbike and the race was lost.

ok i got it the answer is

The rewrite of the sentence that corrects the dangling modifier is D.

Explanation:

A dangling modifier is a word or phrase that modifies a word not clearly stated in the sentence. For instance, in A it is not clearly understood who is coming around the bend too quickly.

The dangling modifier is fixed by naming the appropriate or logical doer of the action as the subject of the main clause, such as in D. In D the participle is immediately followed by the NP "Jim", which is the doer of the action, the one coming around the turn too quickly. Therefore, it is understood that the participle phrase is modifying said noun.

in this passage from chapter 6 of "animal farm", by george orwell, what the author is ridiculing in this passage is the frivolity of some rules.

clover, the mare, believes she remembers that the fourth commandment forbade sleeping in beds because it was something that humans did. snowball, napoleon, and the pigs are brain-workers who look after the welfare of the farm. they are the obvious leaders because they are smart, and so they are entitled to eat the best food and sleep in beds. it is squealer, who says these lines making the difference between sleeping with sheets, what humans do, and sleeping in beds, what pigs do. the unwillingness to question authority makes the oppressed to obey without thinking.

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