Composition about "the day i ran away" with 500 words

It was a dark and stormy afternoon. I have had enough. My step mom Patricia  so vindictive. I tried to tell my dad. Unfortunately, he was blinded by love. I packed my bags and left. I was walking for hours until a  lady decided to pick me up. I was so scared, but it was dark and raining. There were no options left. In one hour I arrived  at my mother's house. My dad never even knew I was gone. I stayed with my mother for a couple of days before her boyfriend returned. Then I was on my own again.

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