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English, 23.06.2019 18:00, hailey6822

Pls asap how should sentences 2 and 3 be combined? a. my concern is not about the safety of the ride, rather than about the appropriateness of the ride for its intended customers, young children. b. my concern is not about the safety of the ride, yet about the appropriateness of the ride for its intended customers, young children. c. my concern is not about the safety of the ride, but about the appropriateness of the ride for its intended customers, young children. the full text is down below. september 7, 2005 amherst amusements inc. 3200 gleeson ave., suite 5 amherst, new york 14261 to whom it may concern (1)i am writing to express my concern about one of the rides your company provided for the erie county children’s festival this past weekend. (2)my concern is not about the safety of the ride. (3)it is about the appropriateness of the ride for its intended customers, young children. (4)the name of the ride—killer bees—as well as the graphic portrayal of bees attacking people and pets illustrated on the walls and passenger cars–are in no way appropriate for young children. (5)i know of several children who were frightened by the appearance of the ride and many adults, including festival organizers, who were very upset. (6)very poor judgment was used when this ride was designed (and very bad judgment was used when your company distributed this ride for use). (7)i have also written to the erie county parks and recreation department with my complaint. (8)i can assure you that we, the parents of erie county children, will not allow something like this to happen again. (9)i will personally do everything i can to make sure that your company does not receive our counties business in the future if you continue to consider this ride a suitable amusement for young children. sincerely, tamara reed

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