Which revision would best improve the underlined part of this quotation from paragraph 10? a) ‘nothing is as striking as the grand sight before one when your eyes meet the overland train that slows…’ b) ‘seldom does a sight more grand and more striking meet a person’s eyes, as when he sees the overland train slowing…’ c) ‘a sight more grand stands out seldomly more before one as striking as the one that meets your eyes when the overland train slows…’ d) ‘a sight more grand, seldom stands out before a person who is as striking as that, meets his/her eyes with the overland train which slows…’

Even though you do not provide the underlined part of the quotation from paragraph 10, the answer to this question is quite easy to pinpoint due to advanced knowledge of the English language.

The best sentence is the one which offers a syntactic inversion, because it is the one that produces a more emphatic result. And being that the main purpose of inversions, it seems quite an obvious pick.

So, the final answer for this question is:

B) ‘seldom does a sight more grand and more striking meet a person’s eyes, as when he sees the Overland train slowing…’

This sentence provides more emphasis as well as a better and clearer grammatical construction.

not exaxtly

explanation: it depends on the situation like if u do something good there will be good consequences which arent punishments but if you do somthing bad there will be bad consequences which are punishements.

- "these rights are natural and god-given to all men equally." (i disagree cuz i kind of think it's 'a' but who knows.)