Does anyone mind me with a essay
it's why we should make abortion illegal

Well I'm not sure exactly what you need help with but I can try!
This sounds like it's an essay about your opinion on abortion. if that's right, you should: •Start by stating why you believe it should be illegal.
•Make sure you have both sides of the argument (talk about how some people disagree and why BUT say it in a way you're still supporting your side.)

"There are people that don't want abortion to be illegal because there will still be women having unsafe abortion, even though it's not that different. Abortions are unsafe for women in the first place, plus it's killing a baby."

I am personally pro choice and I don't think it should be illegal, so I'm just saying what I've heard other people say.

You should probably have between 5-6 paragraphs, including an introduction and a conclusion.
1. Introduction
2. Supporting your opinions #1
3. Supporting your opinions #2
4. Talking about the other side
5. How life would be with abortion being illegal(optional)
6. Conclusion

And again, I'm not exactly sure what you needed help with but I really hope this helped!!! Good luck!

The answer would be d, coherence.