She gasped with excitement and shouted over the noise of the helicopter, "the islands in the sky are real." finish this story in about 150 - 200 words.

She reached over and shook her dad, who was driving the helicopter. "Dad, dad!" She yelled over the helicopter. "We have to land! Please!". Her dad gave her a shrug as if to say, Sorry can't hear you. Emily pointed at the islands and her dad nodded.  The helicopter veered left and landed gently onto one of the floating islands. Emily stumbled out in excitiment. She whooped in delight. "Dad! Your stories are real, the floating islands!" She jumped about. When suddenly she blacked out. Her thoughts drifted about in the dark and Emily slowly opened her eyes, a white light burned her eyes. She groaned.

Hope it helps, didn't have time to finish. Sry

in the door-way, with his head in the room and with a lantern in hand with the most slight ray of light shining from it; so small and opening it so slowly to not disturb the old mans sleep.

i have watched the play of this story last friday.

awnser:

one thing blogging and good copywriting share is a conversational style, and that means it’s fine to fracture the occasional rule of proper grammar in order to communicate effectively. both bloggers and copywriters routinely end sentences with prepositions, dangle a modifier in a purely technical sense, or make liberal use of the ellipsis when an em dash is the correct choice-all in order to write in the way people actually speak. but there are other mistakes that can detract from your credibility. while we all hope what we have to say is more important than some silly grammatical error, the truth is some people will not subscribe or link to your blog if you make dumb mistakes when you write, and buying from you will be out of the question.