Hello can you correct me this text

my name is adriana ,i have 14 years old and i am in 9th grades. i have a shy personality, and i am talkative but mostly embarrassed but i am brave ,tenacious, i am a highly ambitious person, and i will never give up on
anything. so while i still have your attention, i would like to make my
intentions clear on why i should be elected as your class president. i promise that i will be careeful with thing that will happend in our school ,i promise would like everyone to have fun white learning, i will encourage people to each other and yf you vote for me i won't forbid all phones, i
will be open to any and all ideas, you can count on me and trust me and i promise to make this first high school year unforgettable. my biggest cality is to look on the bright side of the life .sometimes in my life i was want to give i remind that the life is a beautiful place and on every day day is a new day with a new story.
in our school is a big is with bad boys who disapointed smart guys from this school. i believe that with all of these traits, i can promote and improve this class. to do this, i will always look out for others by devoting time to their needs. i promise to give detention to those who misbehave, but also give rewards to those who don't. i won't be disappointed in those who make mistakes, but instead, teach them the right and smart thing to do. i am confident that by being class president i can make our class a happier place
if i will be the president ,i promise that i will make that problem to go up. after i am elected, this class will be remembered as tenacious, brave, orderly, and smart. after all a bright class, is the right class. in order to succeed, i need your allegiance and support, for me as class president,
i hope you will vote me! you!

I corrected the text for you.

You did quite well.

"My name is Adriana, I am 14 years old and in the 9th grade. I have a shy personality, I'm talkative, but mostly embarrassed. However, I am brave ,tenacious, and I am a highly ambitious person. I will never give up on  anything. While I still have your attention, I would like to make my  intentions clear on why I should be elected as your class President.

I promise that I will be careful with things that are to happen in our school. I promise to make learning fun for everyone. I will encourage people to help each other and if you vote for me, I won't forbid phones from being used on school premises. I  will be open to any and all ideas. You can count on and trust me. I promise to help make this first High school year unforgettable. My biggest quality is to look on the bright side of life. There was a time in my life where I wanted to give up...but I remembered that life was a beautiful gift and that everyday is a new day with a new story.

In our school, there are problemsthat is with mischievous individuals who disappoint other kids from this school. I believe that with all of these traits, I can promote and improve this class. To do this, I will always look out for others by devoting time for their needs. I promise to give detention to those who misbehave, but also give rewards to those who don't. I won't be disappointed in those who make mistakes, but instead, teach them the right and smart thing to do. I am confident that by being class president, I can make our class a happier, better place.

If I were elected president, I can assure you that no problems are to arise in any way. After I am elected, this class will be remembered as tenacious, brave, orderly, and smart. After all, a bright class is the right class. In order to succeed, I need your allegiance and support for me as class president,

I hope you will vote for me! Thank you!"

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