What do you need to do while you revise your rough draft

Make sure you spelt everything right, make sure all punctuation is correct, and make sure there isn’t more information you can add, the more the better.

The correct answer is a

The career that i have* decided to present this year is photography. photographers use both aritficial and natural lighting*use a transition sentence when going into the 2nd paragraphso.. photographer? *in order for me to be a photographer* scratch "accomplish this ranking" then say, i must first.. and continue on the sentence instead of different use various*