Read the beginning of the literary analysis paragraph. the writer has a very accomplished style. his descriptions make the facts more dramatic for the reader. which sentence would further develop the paragraph by providing evidence to support the point? in addition to providing facts, the writer uses a variety of interesting words. the writer repeats the word “deadly” so much that it becomes alarming. last night, i couldn’t stop thinking, “wow,” about what the writer said. the writer has good control of his language, tone, and point of view.

The correct answer is the sentence that reads “The writer repeats the word “deadly” so much that it becomes alarming”. The first line of the excerpt above mentions the main topic: the writer’s style. Style defines the author’s way of writing or telling a story. Some of the characteristics that make up the style of a narration are voice, tone, language, and the writer’s point of view. The correct sentence supports the main topic of the literary analysis paragraph by providing a word from the source text (deadly) which proves that the writer has a very accomplished style. The rest of the sentences or options could be part of the literary analysis paragraph, but they would not further develop it by providing evidence to support the point (the writer’s style) as the correct sentence does.  

The writer repeats the word “deadly” so much that it becomes alarming

6  then the  lord  said to cain, “why are you angry?   why is your face downcast?   7  if you do what is right, will you not be accepted? but if you do not do what is right, sin is crouching at your door;   it desires to have you, but you must rule over it.”

8  now cain said to his brother abel, “let’s go out to the field.”  while they were in the field, cain attacked his brother abel and killed him.