Your turn to write! using the notes and ideas you’ve compiled throughout this lesson, write a polished 3 paragraph essay about the best and worst times in vincent van gogh’s life. there is no right or wrong answer, but you must use textual evidence from the biography as support for your claims.

you wright a 3 paragraph on vincen van gogh's life using textual evidence from the biography as support for your claims.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.