Read the following passage either out loud or to yourself, looking for the following five mistakes: 1-fragment, 1-run-on sentence, 1-missing comma, 1-missing apostrophe, and 1- verb mistake. rewrite the paragraph correctly and underline your corrections: when a group of rare white lions arrived at the philadelphia zoo. it was an exciting event. the lions were the only ones of their kind in north america they soon became the zoo's most popular exhibit. the lions are native to southern africa. they are so rare because of a problem caused by their unusual color. most lions, with their golden-brown color, can sneak through grass and trees without being detected. but the moonlight shining on the white lions' coats make it difficult for them to hunt at night. its too easy for other animals to see them. therefore most white lions in the wild starve to death. although all the white lions in philadelphia are female, the zoo is hoping to get a white male soon and raise a family of white lion cubs.

Read the following scene from trifles. sheriff (chuckling). married to the law. (moves toward the other room.) i just want you to come in here a minute, george. we ought to take a look at these windows. county attorney (scoffingly). oh, windows! sheriff. we’ll be right out, mr. hale. (hale goes outside. the sheriff follows the county attorney into the other room. then mrs. hale rises, hands tight together, looking intensely at mrs. peters, whose eyes take a slow turn, finally meeting mrs. hale’s. a moment mrs. hale holds her, then her own eyes point the way to where the box is concealed. suddenly mrs. peters throws back quilt pieces and tries to put the box in the bag she is wearing. it is too big. she opens box, starts to take the bird out, cannot touch it, goes to pieces, stands there . sound of a knob turning in the other room. mrs. hale snatches the box and puts it in the pocket of her big coat. enter county attorney and sheriff.) county attorney (facetiously). well, henry, at least we found out that she was not going to quilt it. she was going to—what is it you call it, ladies! mrs. hale (her hand against her pocket). we call it—knot it, mr. henderson. what changes might a director or screenwriter make to the original version of this scene in order to best emphasize the mood? cut dialogue from the scene to make it a more appropriate length update the setting to appeal to a more modern-day audience omit the actions of the characters to avoid confusion and chaos include the use of lighting, camera angles, and sound effects