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the trombone
jerry stepped off the bus at the music school, and he mentally reviewed the correct trombone slide positions as he walked to room 10 at the end of the hall. he sat down at his chair in front of the music stand and smiled eagerly at nadine, his teacher, who gave him a strange look.
“where’s your trombone? ” she asked.
“oh, no! ” he’d left it on the bus! “what’ll i do? ” he asked, after explaining the situation to nadine.
“you’ll have to get it back, or your parents are out nine hundred dollars.”
“oh, no.” he clapped his hands to his face in despair.
she sent him home without a lesson. the bus ride back was pure agony. it reminded him of the previous bus, where the catastrophe had occurred. fortunately, this driver, to whom jerry confided his plight, advised him to call the bus company’s lost and found. but it was six o’clock; the bus company’s phone recording said that the lost and found closed at five.
the next day, jerry’s father drove him to the bus company office, and—the trombone wasn’t there. no one had turned it in.
“i’m an idiot,” jerry moaned, as his father drove him to the music school to meet his doom. “i never do anything right.”
“you’re not an idiot, you’re a normal kid, and you do a million things right. now you’ll never do this kind of thing again. if the trombone doesn’t show up, we’ll work out a way for you to pay for it over time.”
walking the corridor to room 10 beside his father, jerry felt like a pirate walking the plank. with a feeling of dread he opened the door. inside stood nadine, working the slide on a trombone but not putting the mouthpiece to her lips. wait—the trombone had a familiar dent on the bell and a familiar little scratch on the mouthpiece. it was his!
“someone turned it in at the desk,” nadine smiled. “a passenger from your bus. goodness for honest people, huh? ”
jerry sank into his seat with an immense sigh of relief, and vowed to himself that he would never do anything wrong again in his life.

write a summary of the story you just read.

Jerry stepped off the bus at the music school and went into it to see his teacher Miss Nadine, they started talking and Jerry realized that he had lost his Trombone. The teacher suggested him to go back to his house and try to find it in his way. Jerry gets into the bus and feels really sad because it reminds it to the previous bus where he had lost his Trombone, he told the bus driver what had happened and the driver advised him to go to the Bus Company to see if they have the trombone in the lost and found section.

Jerry’s father took him to the Bus company but there was no luck, the trombone was not there. Then Jerry starts regretting being so silly but the father tells him those kinds of things happen and that he is a normal kid and has done many right things, and that they will find a way to solve the problem.

They go back to the music school where the teacher tells him that a passenger from the bus had returned the trombone.

Explanation:

Jerry had just alighted the bus and lost his trombone. On realizing that he had lost his trombone Jerry started looking around. If he did not get his trombone back, Jerry’s parents were to pay nine hundred dollars for the trombone.  The bus drive back home for Jerry was pure agony. It reminded him of what had happened previously in the bus where she had lost the trombone.

The trombone Jerry was about to go to trombone lessons.

Upon arrival, he realized that he had forgotten his trombone on the bus. He called the bus company's lost and found and went the next day with his father, hoping that someone found his trombone. But nobody had turned in a trombone. When he went to music school the next day, he saw his teacher Nadine holding his trombone. She explained to him that another passenger found the trombone and turned it in at the music school. Jerry was relieved and vowed he would never do anything wrong again.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.