In at least 100 words, rewrite the above excerpt using clauses to add variety and interest.

i would but it seems that you do not have the "above excerpt" stated can you post the excerpt so we can try to you to the best of our abilities

the man was nervous. he looked over the edge. the world was far below him. he tightened the straps of his parachute. the man jumped out of the plane.

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the sentence that best describes the tone of the passage from the radio broadcast compared to the passage from the book is b. the radio broadcast has a more surprised tone.

consider the text evidence: in the passage from the book, the description is more matter-of-fact. it is simply describing the things resembling little grey snakes, but there is no urgency in the description. on the other hand, in the passage from the radio broadcast, there is definetely urgency (you can tell from the expression used, "good heavens", which clearly indicates surprise.)