(i'm really bad at essays)
my essay needs to be 250 words long and i've only written 85 but i think i'm done

i need someone to
1. tell me if i'm missing anything
or
2. rewrite it and stretch it
the book is a connecticut yankee in king arthur's court novel by mark twain

below is what i have so far

the theme i chose, for a connecticut yankee in king arthur's court, is how new technology changes the world around us. the picture i drew to go along with the theme was hank, the main character, on the phone with clarence telling him to bring 500 soldiers over to declare the king as the king. that was the main reason i chose this exact scene out of all because if hank had not created the phone, the king could have very well have been hung.

HI! Yeah thats actually pretty good, although you might wanna add something to it! here let me help.

Hank Morgan, born in Hartford, Connecticut, was head superintendent at a vast arms factory. There he had the means to create anything – guns, revolvers, cannons, boilers, engines, and all sorts of labor-saving machinery. If there wasn’t already a quick, newfangled way to do a thing, Hank could easily invent one. Supervising more than a thousand men had also taught Hank how to handle just about anybody – until he found himself involved with a bully named Hercules in a “misunderstanding conducted with crowbars,” and was knocked out by a “crusher” to the side of his head. When he came to, Hank was sitting under an oak tree. A man decked out in polished armor appeared and thundered toward confused, groggy Hank. After confronting him rudely, the man claimed Hank as his prisoner and took him to his court in the land of Camelot. Hank had been captured by Sir Kay of King Arthur’s Roundtable. He was presented before a court led by Merlin, the braggart magician who had helped Arthur in his rise to the throne, and it was quickly decreed that Hank Morgan should die at mid-day on June twenty-first, the year of our Lord. Certainly, King Arthur’s England was not the gallant world depicted in Fairy Tales, but a cruel, feudalistic society; and it looked as though Morgan would be a casualty of this barbaric order. But, resourceful Yankee that he was, Hank remembered that on June 21, a total eclipse of the sun had supposedly occurred. If indeed he was a nineteenth-century traveler lost in the days of chivalry, he could use this knowledge to his advantage.

Maybe add something like that you know. Glad to help

a question like this requires the excerpt to be included in order to answer the question.

in ray bradbury's short story "a sound of thunder", mr. eckels's fearfulness leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.

in the story, mr. eckels, who is a hunter, hires a time travel company to travel to the age of dinosaurs. although he is excited for the hunting expedition at the beginning, when they reach there and mr. eckels sees the tyrannosaurus, he feels frightened. as he is afraid of the tyrannosaurus, he steps off the path although he has been warned not to do it. by stepping off the path, the entire course of the future is affected: mr. eckart alters the future by stepping on a butterfly, which causes a new man to be elected president in the future. in that way, it is mr. eckart's fearfulness what triggers 'the butterfly effect' and what leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.