Which sentence should be revised to reduce wordiness? a. people don't often consider how thoroughly their activities are monitored and recorded. b. some monitoring, such as video surveillance in many businesses, including banks and retail stores, is to be expected as necessary in order to provide security for the businesses. c. people live with a general expectation of privacy, not considering how thoroughly their daily actions are monitored and recorded by various devices. d. people live with a general expectation of privacy, but in reality their daily actions are being monitored and recorded by various devices.

Plz im willing to put all my points on the line for this so it would be very nice if u guys could (there is also brainliest on the line)think of an intense argument you had or witnessed sometime in your life. close your eyes and remember every detail. to turn this into a dramatic scene you will need to make changes that will make it make more sense to the audience 500-600 words a description of the set up that explains what happened before the scene diction that matches the characters character objectives and obstacles are clearly conveyed a scene that escalates in dramatic intensity diction that is appropriate to the audience words that are not wasted in idle chit chat action (stage directions) that enhance the scene proper formatting for dramatldr i need a 500- 600 word argument that is understandable ot a high school audience