I'm trying to create a good story for an english final. me with i wanted to make it about a single father and his struggling raising his 3 very young children after the loss of his girlfriend. (the children would be 1-4 years old) i have gotten pretty far, but i don't know what else to do.

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.