Hi can someone check my work : d question : in this lesson, we have focused on using strong and interesting word choices, combining short phrases to achieve complex sentences, and using subordinate conjunctions and absolute phrases. use these tools to you write a descriptive paragraph of three to five sentences for the following situation. use proper spelling and grammar. situation - reading a book it was a dark and dreary day outside and there was nothing to do because the rain would not stop falling. i wandered around the house aimlessly until i found myself in front of the book shelf. i grabbed the first book i saw, and thought, "at least this'll give me something to do. it was a book about a girl who lived in india, i have never been to india, so it was very interesting to read. hours went by, and soon my mother called to me and asked, "claire, the sun is out, would you like to go out and play? " i then replied, "no, i would much rather sit here and read my book."is there anything i need to change?

Here is an edited version of your initial answer (it was still great):

It was a murky and dreary day outside with nothing to do since the rain wouldn’t stop pouring down. Wandering around the monotonous house aimlessly, I suddenly found myself in front of the antique book shelf. I snatched at the first book I glimpsed at and thought, “At least this’ll give me something to do.” The book discussed the life of a girl who lived in India which I’ve never even stepped a foot in. Therefore, it was very exciting and adventurous to read. Hours went by and soon my mother shrieked, “Claire, the sun it out, would you like to go out and play?” I then responded, “No, I would much rather take the weight off my feet and read my book.”

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answer; i believe that the correct answer is (north and south);

your multimedia presentation should meet the following specifications: • it should be a minimum of four written paragraphs in length, which includes an introduction that previews the topic, incorporates facts, definitions, quotations, or other important information. • it should address all of the questions assigned in the webquest. • it should use vocabulary specific to the topic. • it should include a works cited page to document all sources. • it should reflect mastery of the basic rules of grammar, punctuation, and spelling. • it should use formatting, multimedia, and graphics to reinforce and extend the content. • it should include three multimedia elements and should use at least two of the following types of multimedia: 1. photographs 2. video clips 3. audio clips 4. maps 5. charts 6. graphs 7. works of art (such as original songs, sculptures, painting, performances) • it should be presented in one of the following formats: 1. word document 2. powerpoint presentation 3. prezi presentation can i have points idk the answer