Can somebody add adjectives and adverbs. to this Two teens – or kids, as they were called now – were on their way home from a secret meeting. As they walked in the shadows to avoid detection, they tripped on a huge titanium cylinder. Etched into the surface were a series of scratched-out words. The only words they could make out were, "He will prevail. The kidz dragged the heavy cylinder into a hidden alleyway and twisted it open. The glow from their flashlights revealed what was inside. With gasps of relief, they looked at each other with hope in their eyes for the first time in years.

Leo and simon then dragged the cylinder object full of stuff home to tell there mom and leo is a advenchurs kid and he like cars and video games and stuff like that so he was very excited because in 2514 this type of stuff was exciting and they were going back home to show there mom but then two people walked in front of them and then took the capsule and they could not do nothing about it but then leo said to simon that it was there only chance to make things better in new york since half of new york is out of food and the crime rate is high and people are getting killed and mugged every day and there is only a few 100 people left bc there mom can't afford to move so then simon agreed and they followed the people to an abandoned warehouse and then they went out the door to smoke so then leo climbed in the window and then he grabbed the capsule but then then the thugs saw him and grabbed him then asked where is the other little rat hiding but leo did not tell them that his brother was just outside the window so then they tied him up to a pole then he looked at simon and signld to him with his eyes to leave but simon shook his head and then he looked at leo like he had a plan so then he got a can and threw it at a metal pipe and then the thugs left to see the noise was so then simon climbed thru the window and tried to un-tie leo but the thugs saw them then the boys asked them to let them go and they just want to go home and show there mom what they found and the thugs actually felt sympathy and said if they gave them 20$ they could go with the capsule and the boys had 12$ each so they gave them all of it and then the thugs let them go so then they wear goin home but then they seen a well know new york gang called the blue dragons on the bridge to their neighborhood and the blue dragons are the reasons for the muggings and killings around town and they were hanging out on the bring and if u didnt have money for them they would stab you and the boys knew this so They backed up and went into a thin alley and talked about what they should do. Simon said let's just wait it out but then Leo said they have to show there mom now and the street light would come on by then and UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES WOULD THEY BE OUT AT NIGHT so then leo had the idea to go under the bridge and simon agreed and they went under the bridge and got to their neighborhood

They got home and showed there mom all the stuff in the capsule and she was amazed and the kids asked can this help new york city and there mom said maybe so then there mom went to the mayor of new york and showed him all the stuff and asked him can it change anything in new york and the mayer said yes so he went live on new york tv and showed them what their ancestors gave to them and what they thought 2514 would be like and in 2014 new yorkers buried a capsule for us and now today we found this capsule and we shall prevail and then the crime rate went down and some people started to move back to new york the oil factories got shut down so there was not so much black in the sky not in all a day's work of course but new york was looking better than it did before that's for sure and all the blue dragon members wear put away in jail and the mugging kinda went down there was almost 8millinon people in new york as there was in 2014 and their economy was growing and lets just three words man shall prevail