Completing Business Messages You are working as a medical administrative assistant at Saint Catherine Children's Hospital. Janet, your
supervisor, asks you to review and edit an email that she is preparing to send out to the staff. Before it is
sent, provide your recommendations for improvement.
17. Read the email below and identify four areas where improvement could be made in grammar and
sentence structure. Next, create one recommendation for each area of improvement.
(Hint: Refer to your textbook for recommendation ideas.)
Areas of Improvement
Recommendations
a. Fix the run on sentences
di Type answer here
f. Type answer here
b. The message should be a positive
attitude-not negative
C. Spell check throughout
g. Type answer here
h. Type answer here
d. Fix grammatical and punctuation
errors throughout
Ultimate Medical Academy,
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Staff,
It has come to my attenten that many of you are leaving early from work Because of you all like to
leave early, many patients tasks are not getting accomplishd on the due date. I am not going to tolerate
misbehavior and disrespect. Some of you do not know this but "I call the shots" around here. I thought
was a role model for you all beause I arrive on time to work evry day I am organizd, I am dedicated to job
I am honest and I am reliable. I expect the same in return I expect that y'all come to work on time
and leave when your time is over. I will not tolerate misbehavior and disrespect any more.
Sincerely,
Martha Smith