On september 1, pat hopkins established on a cloud corporation (occ) as a provider of cloud computing services. pat contributed $15,000 for 1,500 shares of occ. on september 8, occ borrowed $22,000 from a bank, promising to repay the bank in two years. on september 10, occ wrote a check for $17,000 to acquire computer equipment. on september 15, occ received $1,550 of supplies purchased on account and, on september 16, paid $1,550 for september rent. through september 22, occ billed its customers for $11,850 of services, of which occ collected $7,450 in cash. on september 28, occ paid $615 for internet and phone service this month. on september 29, occ paid wages of $5,800 for the month. finally, on september 30, occ submitted its electricity meter reading online and determined that the total charges for the month will be $780. this amount will be paid on october 14 through a preauthorized online payment. required: 1. indicate the accounting equation effects of the september events, using table below. reference each transaction by date. (enter any decreases to account balances with a minus is what i have so far, but i can't figure the rest out.)assets = liabilities + stockholders’ equity september 01 cash 15,000 common stock 15,000september 08 cash 22,000 note payable 22,000 september 10 equipment 17,000 september 15 supplies 1,550 accounts payable 1,550 september 16 cash (1,550) september 22 cash 7,450 accounts receivable 11,850 september 28 cash (615) september 29 cash 5,800 salaries and wages expense (5,800)september 30 accounts payable 780

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