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1. what is the writer's main purpose or theme? does the structure of the paper complement its
purpose and content? explain in narrative form as opposed to a yes/no format.
2. how does the introduction catch the reader's attention or generate interest in the topic? if it
does not, how can this be accomplished?
3. what organization format is used for the body paragraphs? is it consistently used for all the
information? are any variations justified?
4. is each main point clearly explained? what type of support is used?
5. what type of support information could be added to clarify the main points?
6. does the conclusion summarize the main ideas? if not, how can this be accomplished?
7. are grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, word usage, etc. correct? did you see any errors
that need to be fixed?
8. were in-body citations and references properly used?
9. what is the strongest part of the paper? why is it good?
10. what can be improved? how can it be better?

increase soil erosion                                             reduce soil erosion

cattle grazing                                                         hydroseeding

deforestation                                                         contour plowing

                                                                                planting vegetation

plant roots basically hold the top soil

together and stop soil erosion because

in such situation top soil is not removed

during flood but cattle grazing causes

soil erosion because cattle consume the

grasses and herbs and top soil is exposed.

same situation occurs because of

deforestation, the trees and plants are cut

down to expose top soil which causes soil

erosion

answer : haversian

[explanation: -(compact bone is organized as parallel columns, known as haversian systems, which run lengthwise down the axis of long bones. these columns are composed of lamellae, concentric rings of bone, surrounding a central channel, or haversian canal, that contains the nerves, blood vessels, and lymphatic system of the bone)]