Could y'all give me your honest opinions on the sketches I did the other day? What should I work on? Sorry the lighting is really bad LOL

I think they are a good point to start from. Maybe work on more confident lines and proportion (help with proportion by drawing out some guiding lines so everything looks even)

I LOVE THEM!! ❤❤

They are both so cuute! :D I love how you colored their hair!! And the shadowing is *chefs kiss*. I love it when a picture is shadowed it really brings it to life. :)

Also, may I ask if you used a picrew to inspire the person with blue hair? I'm just wondering cause it reminds me of a specific picrew.

i'm not sure i completely understand your question, but i will do my best.

i think the answer you are looking for is sequence. (see below)

a repeated melodic fragment would be best defined as repetition, while repeated chords (different or the same) could be a chord progression. however, you then mentioned the chord and melodic fragment beginning on higher or lower pitches, in that case, the answer could be best defined as a sequence. the definition of a sequence is as follows: "the restatement of a motif or longer melodic (or harmonic) passage at a higher or lower pitch in the same voice."

let me know if this !