Finish my story in the comments I’d wake up before dawn, it being normal because I was basically tied to mom’s schedule. I’d check the weather and smile to myself, noticing it being warmer than usual. I’d grab an apple, hungry but not that hungry, and walk out the door.

i went to the park to walk my fish and it ended up raining so i went to the book store in Bart Franklin (not a real city) and got  magazine but id never had a magazine so i just gave it to my friend chad chad was a little odler than me and had  sibilings and then i went home and mom was there she asked me where i went so i told her and then i had forgot i left my fish at the park so i went back to the park and it was monsooning and my fish had drowned the end.

Explanation:

from around the corner, I could hear moaning and shuffling noises. I groaned, and took a last bite of my apple before tossing it into the gutter.

"Darn zombies" I muttered as I reached back for the handle of my machete. "couldn't even wait til I had a chance to get a coffee"

i got an a+! !