I need help writing a song its missing alot i just dont know what can you help me And now it feels like im falling off the deep end

Never wanted to become more than your best friend

And yet you say that im trippin

When it was you straight up from the beginin

You used to love until you figured out the truth

Never knew the evilest girl was standing next to you

And you knew deep down that you were heartless

Baby your the reason why i even live in darkness

Never meant to hurt you but your just so evil

I just dont get how you hurt so many ppl

Your the wreckage of my ship and the break of my heart

And you're the reason why we fell apart

wow that's good so far. I'd try to find a chorus for it and maybe a bridge and then ud be good. and even if u wanted to add another verse... it looks like you have 2 there already which would work aswell I'm pretty sure

hello!~ kxxrishima here! <3

Explanation:

a bridge would do well! but other than that, it's perfect! <3

satin. 

"very shiny satin may look great in the fabric store or in the sewing room, but once onstage it can look fake and cheap as it reflects the light from the fixtures."

well seeing i am an artist and i actually did a self portrait; i will describe how i painted it.   i used acrylic on a stretch canvas about 4 feet wide by 6 feet tall. i painted myself smiling in a soft pink long dress, white tile floor sitting on a white couch with a table behind and a vase of gorgeous flowers.   i also had a round white hat with a soft pink ribbon through it laying on the floor and on the table behind me was a lit candle. i kept it simple but soft and romantic.